A Rattling Monster [Completed] (Edition in Progress)

This novel is great... and the sarcasm of the author was something that would make you laugh... the author was a great writer so, you guys should try reading this novel and I'm sure you'll love it...

Feels like plot armor. And the only good think about MC is his memory -> that was given as a golden spoon from author.Over all since casting spells is based a lot on memory and mc got perfect memory we can all guess how pointless this book will be.And you can already see face slapping by mc at 7chapter and it will probably get worse.

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I found myself liking the MC much more starting from C3. The characterization feels humorous with an underlying serious tone. I have a personal preference for such atmospheres and the writing accentuates that chapter.Moving on to technical issues, I feel that the novel will improve with less usage of adverbs.I notice that you have a heavy inclination of using the word 'had' and using the phrase 'a small'. Perhaps some variation would help here?All the best!

Look for the other post i already made. I have two accounts so yea. thought id do a review on my other just to get that drippy 5 star. Im planning on writing more and i am currently, its just slow since im still thinking of minor plot points and how i want characters to act n stuff. expect a cool MC in a bit.

I dont know where the author of this book lives to beat him up so I'll just leave a one star instead, his welcome

" There are more on this side! " Aaron jumped to the other side of the Millipede

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