After a while, I began to hear murmurs and the clattering of food trays, which made my empty stomach growl. I moved towards the sound, and came upon two large double doors. I hesitated, and opened the door.
I can't seem to love and it's becoming harder for me to write because every time is see this I feel lazy and have the feeling that I want to create something serious something original also I don't think this style is the best for me
Looking at the blessing and looking at my stigma it seems that the blessing upgraded my stigma. I guess shadow is just a lower tier of darkness, makes sense. It also makes sense that with the blessing and stigma upgrade my Ether stat rose so much. As for the others there is only one conceivable possibility. Mako's potion.
A great story if you don't want to use your brain or question anything and just relax whilst reading repeating stories of the mc shocking everyone, then traveling to a higher "plane" and the repeating, just as I repeatedly said repeating.A little bit of fiction(around chapter 400), the story is slowing down (instead of there being a single battle which was like 1 chap long, I think the last 50 chaps were just one big battle in which new people just randomly join, without a real explanation) i mean like yeahyou have the classical rail guns and robots but that's all the since fiction for nowlike I said not all too much fiction, our mc is just a stupid guy who just uses the system he was given once at the start to create a "perfect" world for life and then forgets it except for like three times when the mc actually had to decide somethingall the real thinking is done by the people of the world, which are actually not as intelligent as a boul of hot pizza but instead have the thought complexity of a 8 year old kidI think it's a great read to just shut your brain down and not think at allit's not perfect English but it's readableso yeah, that are my thoughts about this book
Author-san, your book is amazing considering the fact that you are new to writing. some grammars are not so well written but doesn't affect the book. I like your main character and his interaction with his women... above all, he will make a good husband.
This novel is… dark, and I love it. I was so immersed while reading this, and the writing quality is very nice! Reminds me a lot of Overlord, but more overpowered lol
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