A Marvel Of Reality

The main idea of ​​the story is attractive. The way the plot is handled is very good. But I think this book has one feature that it can make it one of the best books in the world: the mathematics of fiction. The transitions between time periods are legendary. MC is a smart, naughty, and funny boy. Secondary characters and even monsters have their own stories. Almost none of them were overlooked. And obviously the author's general culture and aesthetic sense is very good.There is nothing negative at all, you could say.The author lacks self-confidence and is obsessed with editing.I wish they would skip the editing and release more chapters per week. Still, it deserves 5 stars.

I have to say I am impressed by this novel, the way the world was laid out, the character of our MC, I like every bit of it.I just ask more chapters, and thanx to the author. Looking forward to the developments, how the parents will react and how everything will play out.And honestly, I also like Anir in the real life

the book looks interesting. This is going to be my rating for now. I'll truly rate when I'm done reading it 👍

That's a good writing, tried to keep every character & bg char sense full.Keep options more open for attributes Not just obvious elements (🔥, ⚡, 🌎 etc.) , like illusion,death,life,yin yang many more , didn't introduce any fighting techniques or skills etc. In future I think may be MC will learn alchemy & weapon refining.Hope there are auras ,intents, concepts, domains,laws etc. Love to see in which direction story goes( 3 ⭐ because I don't know how story goes hopefully nxt time I read I can give 5 ⭐)