A HEART HE NEVER MEANT TO HOLD [KNJ Ff]

I like it.                                                                                                                                                   

Rip off of 80 years signing in at the cold palace basically but it’s Still kinda fun The translation is garbage                             

The title of the book is a lie. No way someone buys terrible food for 10 silver and then spends 10 Gold (=1,000 silver) to sell magic super food at 3 silver a piece for a single day would ever make it big.

During the first chapters I really felt that this is gonna be a really interesting story. But there are so many things I really have trouble to understand. 1. The author constantly jumps between scenes often without any intention of coming back to it. 2. In 41 chapters tons of ppl got introduced only to be completely left behind without further attention. 3. The reasoning and the hole chapter with Undine is imo terrible, especially when it comes to reasoning and behaviour of characters. 4. The storyline is in complete chaos because nothing is explained(except for some game mechanics), I can't even try to judge the world background because nothing is explained be it about the game world or the real world. The reader is constantly kept in the dark. While I think this could be a really good story, the behaviour of almost all characters feel childish and immature. For example Qianna(not sure about her name, the girl our MC saved from Aaron) was stronger than Aaron but after their first fight she never tried to get rid of him when he repeatedly attacked the MC. The only thing she'd did was watching and calling of "Watch out!". The list of unreasonable behaviour goes on and on and I don't understand why it is written like that. It takes away a characters credibility and makes it look laughable.

1 star story development. MC has been there for years but once he got the system Enemies suddenly pops outs and starts messing with MC.They have years to get the garden when MC entered the sect. like i would imagine snaching from a newbie would be way easier right.Also it is protrayed that the Wang clan has this grand plan years in the making.Why don’t they get the garden when they had the chance?Story has a lot of plot holes.Translation is 2 stars as there’s some miss translation like Catties turned into tonne…Story background 2 stars cuz meh and it is drag down by the poorly thought out plotline.Character design is 2 stars cuz it’s MC starts learning into the trouble seeking MC category. we all know the problem with the trouble seeking MCs right?MC would deliberately be provocative inorder to drive the plot. Someone makes trouble? MC kills it! Then the master shows up to mess with the MC for killing deciple. It all happens simply because the MC simply cant be polite

Very very slow story.No action for lots of chapters.To much detail for everything feels more like trying to increase word count.Boring to read for more then 5chapters.Will try again when I develop more patience

This novel begins slow, but has a steady pace with a well thought out (and planned) story. A lot of stories have the problem that the main character gets to strong to fast. This is not one one them and the potential of the story is enourmes. In my opinion this is one of the most underrated stories on this site.

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