Earning just €6 an hour is not something to be happy about when your taking care of your family and having to pay a debt that is probably gonna cost more than the cost to run your house for a year. Always getting bullied. by his former school mates who will walk past him in their school uniforms while he is wearing a torn t-shirt and is sweeping the road. He will come back the first at around 4pm while his sis would come back close to 5pm, while his mom would come back at different timings from 11pm-2am. And having the door collectors come to your house every month to collect money from your mom is not a pleasant sight. But even through this tough time Alex still has a friend. His last friend which was from sch. She lives opposite. to him.
Sorry dropping the novel at this pointwhen i read about the children i thought you were adding depth to the novel, letting him have a family of sorts to develop the backstory. I ignored all the obvious plot armor because the overall story was interesting enough to continue and wonder about what will happen nextHowever now i realised his family just turned out to be convinenr sidekicks to go slay the monster king, i feel this novel is very superficial and shallow, the way everything just falls into place for him is very boring and also kinda disgusting to read about. Finally why is he even a imp or demon when most of the time you make him out to be some kind of mr. nice guy...... Did u think a nice demonic imp is interesting? I think at the start it was interesting to see his reaction but later on he turns into such a bland generic human that i feel confused for you the author, u have forgotten the demonic part or monster part of your own main character. So this are the 2 main complaints i have about this novel. Thank you for all the interesting chapters so far.
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I really enjoy the mentality of the main character and the beginning of the story did a great job of making me invested and interested on how things will go once the MC turns into a true powerhouse,
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