70s Military Marriage: The Couple’s a Bit Crazy

I really wanted to like this novel... Novels about blacksmithing are my favorite.But i couldn't, i had to stop at chapter 17...The crafting chapters are perfect, it shows that the author cared and researched a lot about it.But the character interactions are so stupid and irrational that makes my head hurt.I really try to ignore all of that but omg i can't.Some situations are so stupid and forced that feel this story is written by a kid.I meant no disrespect, but this had to be said..

story falls in line with usual second chance vrmmo stories.  the writing and overall story however is quite good and enjoyable.only real downside for me is the grammar.  it reads barely any better than a machine translation.  if author could get a editor to help with his grammar this could easily become an amazing work.if you are interested in this genre of fiction I'd recommend adding to your library, checking in every once and a whole, throwing a stone occasionally, and when author finally gets an editor you binge read this like there's no tomorrow.

Good grammar, a rather interesting premise and an atypical power system and a world that is in the same vein, not much else to say, it's a solid read.

would take no mercy on those against him and his family. The only person that ever deserved

"Don't worry about it, you've noticed the smell, don't you?"

"Cukup ngobrolnye, pertama kita harus menghabisi mereka dulu. jangan lupa, keleman zombie ada dikepalanya. Ayo kita bikin blokade di tangganya. Kata joshua sambil menunjuk tangga munuju lantai bawah. we should deal with them first.

Moving as fast and as calmly as she could, Lily's entire body released even more cold mist with the surrounding area turning to ice. Her hands began to glow one more time as she slammed both of her hands into the ground.

A youth looked at his tablet screen, he was currently part of a college development team for a new   RPG mixing eastern and western themes . He was really exhausted with all prep work he'd put in over the last few months to to prepare a presentable demo for the Japanese company they where marketing it to .He had been running on fumes a nd couldn't help but doze off dreaming of nailing  girls  killing monsters .He giggled to himself In his dream . This project was going to be his crowning achievement validating all the years he spent researching dnd ,mythology, webnovels  and numerous mmorpg system mechanics.