Well I'm the author, so I have to give it 5 stars, but here are some reasons why you should as well.1. You like face slapping? There will be plenty of that!2. You like dark comedy? This novel's dark enough that I can't even see the light switch in front of me.3. You like cultivation? Well join an adventure where each step will be a slow climb.4. You like systems? I got all the system you can want, you'll seriously get sick of it.If that didn't convince you, then maybe this will, cute girls...
The synopsis needs to be updated to help you get more readers.The narration needs a little more polishing and you would be there. The plotline is cool. I am looking forward to this project.
The first 10 chapters are super cringe. Then it looks like the story is transitioning into a School Arc. Instant drop. I'm not dealing with generic fanfiction.
This story is unique and well written. The system is more than the general systems that you see in other novels, which is great for people who like to read system novels like me and got tired of repeated novels in the same genre..Looking forward to more chapters and a lot of great ideas through the story.Best wishes for a great novel.
The basic themes and plot of the story is very interesting. I love sci fi and the superhero stuff, but the writing style was not really what I am used to. And I read a lot so this made it harder for me to keep up. In certain scenes, further researching can be very helpful.But these are just my thoughts, all the best for future (ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*.✧
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