The story starts out great with so many face slapping. Yet, although the main character has read ao many books, he still oblivious oh how to act a decent manner. At first it seems great, yet the author repetitive scheme to face slap the other characters just makes it duller and boring.
If u like storys with a very passive guy that will take forever to make Progress With woman than ur correct here. This one is very slow and the decisions of the mc make everything more complicated and slow. Dont bother with this if u want mc to have plot with the Woman after 10 to 20 chaps. It will take more than 100 chapters for that.
Not that good considering the other harry potter fanfictions. There is little to no character development and also does not stress much on the main character just keeps going on and on about the events. It seriously is not good, you can read it but don't blame me for not warning you
I like it it very good the mc has great decision for his owner the story in the simulation system is great the power lv is perfect cant wait for the next chapter
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"Hi there," she told him with a hint of relief in her voice. "Your body was quite damaged, you had a few bone fractures, and you would have been good to stay on the bed for weeks. The last blow you took yesterday had you. I managed to heal your injuries thankfully, but this wasn't enough to get you back and to go."
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