its not that bad but its not amazingthe grammat is good and he had thought about the world and wjat he eants from it. but if i look at the character and develepment it feels mote like a anti hero story than a true villain story. i also dislike how soon the mom was killed off. i usually cry if that happens but i didnt even feel any connection to her and het death wad more like a introduction on why he would hate heroes while his dad was also used and sacrificed by them. also some old dude wanted to give him powers without even knowing him and he rejected 2 times without knowing the deal behind it. wasted opportunity tbh. but all else its a fun book to read. i like how he doesnt know his powers and even gets to confident. would rate it 3.5/5 and will read it to see where it goes
Really great story. It not only kept me fully immersed in the plot, but also somehow found a way to slowly flesh out the characters. Well done author, just one big issue: There is too few chapters!
I'll try to be honest with you this novel has a big problem with the beginning you should make the main character have an accident with the VR helmet and because of the accident he became the barbarian otherwise it's just too much at the beginning of the novel. another thing that I think it's bad is the contrast between everyone in the barbarian powers because the way you explain the barbarian is like three four rounds stronger than everyone it's just too much you know and are the possible end of the novel he will be stronger too because the cultivation manual so he will always be invincible.
The Sagardian stood motionless with an arrow jabbed into his chest. Alyss bit her lip, she felt deep sorrow for the man. But it was one thing to feel sorrow and another to feel guilt. Oliver blamed himself if he hadn't shot the arrow, maybe they could've helped the man.
"Those peasants are in a new village run by your father and the previous elder. I pulled some strings and turned him into a baron working under some land my friend owns."
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