John's consciousness returned after quite a while. As he gazed, sunlight dazzled his lustrous ink blue eyeballs. He was astonished yet pleased to see Alexandra lying with her hand all over him as she drooled in her sleep." She is too tired
As Pietro held her, Wanda stared at Ultron in disbelief, "Yo-you told us we were going to end the Avengers. We were going to kill Tony Stark. We were going to make a better world-"
Perfect world background, fun psychopatich charachter. It the best book i've read for it's violence something too much fan service but it's also a feature
Good start, interesting plot. but you should put a little though about your pacing and period placement. I hope you can keep up the story as well sharpening your skill. Story must be told.
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