Undead Unluck

Loved the drawings. The series has an interesting premise, but it's tarnished by HORRIBLE character writing, it seems as if the author has to maintain some sort of sob story quota, pretty much any relevant character has their obligatory tragic past in tow, and it's shoved into the face of the reader every 3rd panel that they appear in. I have nothing against tragedy in fiction, but the way it's handled here would be right at home in a parody, the way every character is a walking storyteller of their terribly tragic circumstances was almost bearable, given how much I wanted to know what would happen next, what is the story behind X, etc. there is potential in this story, but I had to drop it when the author decided to SPRING yet another sob story on us, on a character where it was so out of place that I...

This makes Naruto's sob stories look like Berserk. Stay away if you don't want to be dissapointed

it gets better after ch120

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Made it all the way to volume 3 before giving up. This manga is 100% ADHD nonsense. Literally every panel is someone exploding for laughs with zero logic or drama behind any of it.

I just can't.
We are not in the 00's no more.

It has a nice premise and story .there are two protagonists one immortal and another unlucky .But then first chapters have loads of echi for no reason other than attracting audience.

A nice execution of the same premise would be Unlucky Boy Undead Girl(This premise is as old as time )

After these chapters it tones down a bit, and some plot is forced into the manga. The plot itself isn't bad ,but it's horribly executed.

I really don't like how the author portrays the un-dead guy since he is supposed to be inmortal ,with his body parts reappearing on his body when severed ,but the author randomly alternates between this and a supersonic regeneration that leaves his body parts all over the place.

Apart from this, the author conveniently changes what each power can do as a poor excuse to see who wins each fight.(he doesn't really care since most the times the loser dies or changes after the defeat)

I say this manga has a lot of potential, although a shonen manga trying to be extra hilarious at times it really looks well thought from the world perspective, if its given a chance it can reach some HxH levels of complexity since it goes very deep into the reasons why they fight and why the universe they live in live by rules such as death, hunger, knowledge, science.

Its refreshing to see an author try to be deep and if you think the whole thing only devolves to an undead who wants to die, well you have another thing coming, it is still fresh and low on chapters, but i do hope the author works more like he is doing and so the publisher gives the plot time to develop.

First I read it, me, your usual shojo reader, was really surprised to see such main character exist.

• main female is the misfortune goddess who brings calamity for those who touches her. her dream is to have a shojo love story with a prince charming. but can't, because of her condition

• main male is an undead looking for death

the twist is, a meteor came down when she kissed her (she did it as a desperate attempt to save her life counting a huge misfortune will fall upon him and the enemy) and the main male who is looking for death is like "a mere kiss can bring such a huge impact! imagine what will happen if we f*ck!"