So… how’d he get pregnant? We need a back story on how he decided to be a surrogate and did the alpha knows/agree with it?? Cause as far as i kno the alpha or omega has to be in there rut/ heat and knot to get pregnant. 🤔🤔 and too much pheromone from an alpha can cause the omega to become in heat. This doesn’t get into it at all. Just started off the omega being pregnant and moving into the alpha house. So it’s confusing. But so far it’s ok.
Not terrible, probably ok for some BL readers, but not me at all. I think the author needs a bit more practice with creating a story, it felt disorganized and kinda like the author was just making it up as they went. The characters were bland, their personalities were very stereotypical and 2D. Just another carbon copy of a poor femme uke with an overly muscular seme with a ridiculously inhuman size package. The art was alright, stayed fairly reliable without wonky errors or proportions, but also bland looking as they had few recognizable features. I decided not to finish this one because it didn't seem to be getting any better.
It is a story of love that was forbidden. A story about crossing a line over and over and over again. A story where the final line that can be crossed is the one between this life and the next. it was a journey reading this, and even after arriving at the end, I don't know where I am. But I don't regret it. not a single step.
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So… how’d he get pregnant? We need a back story on how he decided to be a surrogate and did the alpha knows/agree with it?? Cause as far as i kno the alpha or omega has to be in there rut/ heat and knot to get pregnant. 🤔🤔 and too much pheromone from an alpha can cause the omega to become in heat. This doesn’t get into it at all. Just started off the omega being pregnant and moving into the alpha house. So it’s confusing. But so far it’s ok.
Not terrible, probably ok for some BL readers, but not me at all. I think the author needs a bit more practice with creating a story, it felt disorganized and kinda like the author was just making it up as they went. The characters were bland, their personalities were very stereotypical and 2D. Just another carbon copy of a poor femme uke with an overly muscular seme with a ridiculously inhuman size package. The art was alright, stayed fairly reliable without wonky errors or proportions, but also bland looking as they had few recognizable features. I decided not to finish this one because it didn't seem to be getting any better.