Tour Shangri-La

I hope it will last 10 with a bunch of side stories later

TY for the Burning Effect!!!

imegine reading a fantasy story with fantasy world-building filled with fantasy races, each having their own made-up fantasy settings....
then complain they got some different common sense of what you are used to in the real world

go read nonfictions if you hate it so much

Missing/Cut in half pages on chapter 205

No no, let them cook

The story is good. But one thing is severely lacking. The author is too sane to write this perfectly. The main character is too normal. Such rehabilitation will never work on the mentally deranged.

But other than that, its really good. I cant relate since up to the chapters I have read so far, nothing has been done that couldnt be learnt in a single life. Hell, you could probably  be punished and learn all that in a week irl.

Also ngl, death is hot. She is pretty reasonable, and actually cares. Even when she is being insulted, even if she is forcing the mc to suffer and die over and over again, she still cares. He denied her entire existence. He denied the entirety of death itself. Yet she still spent her time to care. She still went out of her way to rehabilitate him, and she answered him honestly. 10/10 would pound her until she cries uncle

Man, the ending is sad, doing a time-skip all of a sudden, and calling Laios "one of the short-lived races."
I can't even remember if there were any loose ends regarding chilchuck and his wife and whether it got resolved or not because of how long the wait was, I guess I'll have to refresh my memory now.

Not bad but a lot of "information" thats just wrong at the start