The Ring 0: Birthday

Mugiwara
Lyold is Waterrr.

So...Infinite Tsukuyomi but sex

This shit lowkey trash. Alright, so I could fill a whole blog about why this story is poorly written, but I do gotta admit that the concept is interesting and has a lot of potential if done properly.

Mc sick of his life of being bullied and treated like shit, and sick of it. His current situation is too painful for him not to make a change, which is a good start, but even with the interesting premise, the execution is dryer than Sahara Desert and the hook is as bland as a soggy wet piece of cardboard. It’s mc centred, which if done properly would’ve been a nice story, but it all really only has one perspective, a clear divide between black and white. All the characters (mc included) are just as mysterious as a pack of yogurt and are absolute cardboard cut outs.

This story would’ve done better if it was actually more about improving the mc’s life

Technically in hierarchy , anubis is just servant of osiris though

The laptop is missing the letter "o" ch. 26 can't unsee it now, you're welcome :)

Lmaooooo

I WANNA FUCK WALTZ AHHHH

Bro is gaslighting the whole tower

more <3

cant wait for the next chapter!!!

Look, I get it. He saved the world twice. But just because he wants to take a break this time, doesn't mean the threats gonna take a break. Because there is one world here it seems and if that world goes, he goes with it, no matter how 'take it easy' route he takes. Not to mention his old friends there too. At some point, ''I am just reincarnated, don't remember or care about my old friends/life'' won't work when the enemy seem to know about him now and will target him AND the world gonna get destroyed and his 3rd lazy life won't matter anyways.

Although people's drawings are bad the castle and some backgrounds are good
is that because of digital models/computer art?