Alright I'm back, probably for the last time because of these problems I'm about to point out.
First off, the translation isn't good. While I've read worse, this is by far harder to read because you need to put it together yourself half of the time and sentences seem out of place and conversations don't seem like they're even going on.
Secondly, the art still kinda sucks, but it's getting better. Panels still look unfinished, but I can see the final product a lot more than the first chapter.
And third, the only positive part, I have to talk about the story. The story is good, if a bit more confusing than it should be because of the translation.
In total I've gotta give it a 2/10, because while story is important, it's nothing without Art and Word Choice. Hope this helped someone!
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First off, the translation isn't good. While I've read worse, this is by far harder to read because you need to put it together yourself half of the time and sentences seem out of place and conversations don't seem like they're even going on.
Secondly, the art still kinda sucks, but it's getting better. Panels still look unfinished, but I can see the final product a lot more than the first chapter.
And third, the only positive part, I have to talk about the story. The story is good, if a bit more confusing than it should be because of the translation.
In total I've gotta give it a 2/10, because while story is important, it's nothing without Art and Word Choice. Hope this helped someone!