Shiva VS raided was a good fight imo, visuals and entertaining. I’m not really thinking abt the actual mythological or religious representations as it is a fictional story meant for enjoyment it doesn’t have to be the same as long as the story and writing is good. I think the writing here is at its weakest it’s ever been
Looked interesting. 20 pages into the first chapter and the entire allure and mystery to the android people is immediately exposition dumped as to what they are, what they do, when they were made, how they were made, why they were made, and the size of their fucking dicks.
40 pages in and the author immediately gives another infodump flashback that reveals that the androids are infact sapient. Tik tok has obliterated any signs of a functioning prolonged attention span and nobody knows what the fuck pacing is anymore
Trash. Pathetic, personality-less main character that really is quite stupid when you think how incredibly broken his cheat is for even a few seconds. The plot in general feels like it was written by somebody too stupid to take advantage of the gimmick. But the feeling I got the most when reading this was just that everything felt shallow. Shallow relationships, shallow problems, shallow resolution to said problems, nothing had any bite to it, and the humor certainly wasn't good enough to add any charm. It feels like this was written by a twelve year old who's pretending to understand how adult problems work.
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Plot twists were well written imo
40 pages in and the author immediately gives another infodump flashback that reveals that the androids are infact sapient. Tik tok has obliterated any signs of a functioning prolonged attention span and nobody knows what the fuck pacing is anymore
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