World Reformation Activities of the Dark God — Loving Humans So Much, I Reincarnated in One — Chapter 38 Discussion

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This is a light story. No depth and no hardship. The premise is nice enough but there isn't anything here to challenge the reader.

Nor is there anything that exists to challenge the protagonist. Even in terms of an all powerful MC there are methods by which the things important to that MC can still be put in danger. I'm not feeling it here. This feels like a cheap old anime plot where everyone is destined to be happy.

The author has missed an opportunity to show how the MC used his secrets and grew his power while young. This is a staple of these reborn OP MC stories because it's fun to imagine ourselves growing and using those powers while simultaneously managing that secret. Does the MC tell anyone? How do they react? How does he defend the secret? Does anyone figure it out?

Not here. This guy grew up and everything was perfect and sparkly?

Translation work is quite good however.
 
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