- #1
The word terrible cannot do this novel justice. The highest IQ of anyone is less than 50. continuity errors abound. Is "wrong think" a term? It better be.MC is just another Neutered Brainless male chauvinist without any redeeming qualities. and no, not raping someone is NOT a redeeming quality. that is the base 0 state to be expected of anyone.Bad guys are bad because they are bad and look they say mean things so they are bad and you can just kill them because they are bad. I just wrote more words and took more time than the writer ever even attempted or could muster before their nose started to bleed from overthinking.I really am not joking about the IQ rate either. these people are clinically ret*rded. Brain dead. Special needs levels of s*upidity.At first I thought they were treating the High value people nicely because they have the ability to turn against them with super weapons. But that whole idea was thrown out the window when the countries MILITARY just walzed on in and started committing mu*der and mass destruction when they found out the girl the MC is taking care of has a 30k value. like... she could literally just pretend until put into a mecha and just f*cking Kill everyone. Just go on a massive rampage through the city because you literally KILLED her best friends father.No brains. No thoughts to ramifications. Not for even a moment did the writer ever even think that these MILITARY people wouldn't be Literally ret*rded.