- #1
Honestly I wouldn't recommend reading this. This is the story has an interesting concept, but lacks in execution since early on. The story also takes a sharp downturn after it reaches somewhere around c180 or so.The characters in this story lack any sense of intelligence, Which makes it pretty frustrating at the times. And there are events and coincidences everwhere which feel really forced, and are there purely to strech out the story.Spoiler
Some points which I found to be particularly annoying are-
- The MC just happens to be to places at the nick of time to save the next harem member, who then falls in love with his fighting. This happens with almost every girl
- There's a bunch of teammates who are literally point spoken about once, and not even mentioned after that.
- One dimensional characters who abandon every trance of individuality when they meet the mc
- The final boss wants to kill every human, that's his entire goal.
- MCs crush surrenders and helps the final boss, because her friend who's stuck over there might be lonely. She also tries to convince a member of the MCs party and her friend to come with her and her imprisoned. This happens around c180, and the story is reaching c400 and she's still working to help him destroy humanity thanks to the convenient self destructive device which was later planted in her. The author probably wants some kind of touching reunion later, but given that they haven't met in the story at all, her character is more of a princess peach in mario games, just a goal to aim for.
- There's also the fact that he just happens to be next to an immensely powerful mecha which obit he can control, on both the occasions that he was attacked without having a mecha.
- The MC has his pay stolen twice at the start of the story, but still agrees to keep fighting for the people who are stealing his pay. There's kindness and there's being pathetic, the MC crosses that line way too often.
- Lastly, it repeatedly happens that the enemy distracts the MC and his whole team merely by talking to them, and it that much time the mastermind runs away, which feels too forced