- #1
-apparently they're a 4 man party but one of em, the healer got pregnant with the leader of the party.... and then w/o a healer they charged to demon lord base? Are they f*cking serious? The only end I could see is them dying cuz there is no one to heal their injuries and give support, etc. Yet they somehow did it.... and pushed the demon lord back wtf.... and way to go leader of the party, the great "hero"..... maybe he don't want his woman to be in danger... but in exchange he put his other party member in greater danger.... sigh....
-the MC fought in demonsional space for over 10 years.... w/o eating or sleeping or f*cking rest..... he should've died out of exhaustion, physically or mentaly..... yet he's f*cking alive.... and sane to boot.... author throw drain touch to explain how he's still alive and said our MC using marrionette magic on himself while he's sleeping...... seriously author? He's a f*cking human not a machine.....
-the reunion scene with his old comrade is God level awful..... taking into consideration they're true comrades, friends and companions..... and considering what our MC did for them and all things that happened..... the warrior guild master should've rushed and hugged him while crying his eyes out and bawling as soon as he saw him right outside of the guild building..... sure he's aged, sure he got his position to think about, or other things, but if I were in his shoes all of it would fly out of my head when I saw him.... same goes for the now king party member......
-lack of detailed writing is also a problem..... it felt too simple and bland..... honestly I can't feel the emotion in this story.....
[collapse]There are other things that I would like to point out about this novel, but writing all of em is a hassle...... 1/5...... that 1 is actualy for the only thing I found unique in this novel.... the "chicken"