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It's incredibly boring.Good points-Its actually a monster MC.-The MC actually remains a monster mcMixed points-Power progression is decent, but some things feel forced to keep the MC from snowballing out of control. For example, a very arbitrary chance of obtaining [traits]. Sometimes it just works first time no problem, letting him obtain a plot convenient [trait]. Sometimes it doesn't trigger even after dozens of times, forcing him to forego simple but powerful [traits] (if stacked together). Also, he could obtain [Robust Lifeforce] from a c*ckroach, what's stopping him from just eating a whole bunch of insects and small, weak animals to get their [traits]?Bad points-Spoiler
I don't understand the authors decision to send MC to a place where danger is around every corner. After getting in the escape pod, why not just head to an uninhabited planet filled with wildlife. Like one of those "ocean planets" he keeps mentioning. Ye his evolution will be slow, but so what? He can always evolve later, without the sword of Damocles constantly hanging over his head.
[collapse]-Horrible cliche of recurring enemy.-MC has a severe case of I-Must-Chase-Conflict-itus