Became an Evolving Space Monster Chapter 45 Discussion

author literally gave plot armor to the enemy for no good reason, all the while ignoring previously established and cemented facts, later author deleted enemies memories, basically giving plot armor for MC, all this looks ridiculous, author probably came up with some bs and decided to retcon sh*t up in the name of "cool" or whatever.

seeing such bs I can't say it's going to get better, author seems to have no plan on what is happening, retcons mean author has tr*sh memory or tr*sh management skills

Spoiler

in ch16 MC predicted that if he stabbed his opponent then the opponent would shoot him to death, which is impossible because MC has neurotoxin that would completely immobilize the opponent near-instantaneously. It was also explicitly stated the opponent would unholster his gun and shoot him, that is so much time for that magical neurotoxin to work its magic, not to mention MC having enhanced reflexes that should allow him to dodge anyway

in ch21 author went against established fact and deleted everyone's memories of watching surveillance footage to hide MC ability

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editch45: I can't even, I mean I like this novel, but damn some things are just completely inexcusable. This should be put in spoilers but f*ck it, it's part of world-setting, listen here, once police start an operation, they CANNOT communicate with HQ, the only thing they have is a little button called "request reinforcements" that they can push, that's it, as for what the reinforcements should expect, what they should prepare for, what equipment to take, they CANNOT know anything, because police are NOT ALLOWED to communicate information about the mission with the HQ to tell them what is happening

did I mention that biometric monitors that already exist and are being used in reality don't exist in this novel?

i usually give novels 4 stars if they're fine, they got to earn the 5star, this novel loses 1 star for all the retcons and another for absolute dogsh*t worldbuilding