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I'm not gonna lie I've speed read the last part just to be done - the novel had potential unfortunately the potential was for a novel that had one 0 added after the number of chapters. The important and interesting things seem to be glossed over or skipped entirely and the further it goes the worse it gets. The unprompted timeskips make it seem more of a compilation of vignettes than coherent story (thus speedreading). It seem as if halfway through the writer lost interest in the story along with any coherent ideas about where the story was going and wanted to be done with as soon as possible and quickly mashed together preprinted excepts.