Rebirth Before the Return of Spiritual Energy, Investing in the Future Empress! Chapter -- Discussion

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Good concept that could have been interesting, but everything is 'tell, not show' laziness.

It suffers from the problem of every other system/LitRPG story where instead of character growth, the MC does something irrelevant and gets +1 to his stats. Instead of using his memory and wits to figure out the best path forward, his systems tells him about everything that is going to happen to the future.

The MC is also kind of a scumbag who feels no guilt over taking advantage of a child. That's par for the course for reincarnation novels though.
 
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