Fourth Perspective Chapter -- Discussion

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  • #1
From my rec list review: 5/5 for super interesting sci-fi/fantasy power types case fic. Unique powers and cool scenarios.

I saw other reviewers comparing this to The Earth is Online. To be honest, I much prefer this story to The Earth is Online, which had some interesting scenarios but had very bland MC/MLs and which dragged on a little too long. YMMV.
 
  • #2
I liked this story a lot! It showed a lot of emotional vulnerability in characters, which is so realistic for the age group. There were a lot of grammatical mistakes BUT it didn’t hinder the story. The author was clear that English is her second language, so I’d say her work is impressive.
 
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