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I’m pretty sure the current translator use MTL without a help of editor (there’s a lot of place that felt out of place and some that’s just nonsense to me) and that’s the first down point.The story itself is nothing exceptional too. It’s a common story where MC get transmigrate to another world and struggle/get his harem. It’s not a bad plot but my problem is that it the story took place 3years after he’s transmigrated. There’s mention of what happened in those 3years and it sounds more interesting than what I read at the moment.The author also introduce a lot of plot point but never really follow through. MC himself is also contradict himself Spoiler
He had mention that he don’t know whether he had it in him to kill a person then proceed to go for the kill when he spot the chance to attack enemy’s general
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