Quick Transmigration: The Boss’ White Moonlight is Resurrected Chapter 108 Discussion

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I really did like this but I feel like after the 4th-ish arc, the writing seemed to get worse (?) I don't know if maybe it was the translation but the whole entire story downgraded and seemed to be written by a middle school Wattpad user.

I enjoyed the 2nd, 3rd, 4th, and 6th arc throughly.

The 1st arc is simple and honestly just lets you know how the story is going to be written, and honestly it stays that way until the 7th arc.

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The 2nd arc was a sweet school romance, I did lowkey feel so bad for the raider in this one because both our MC and ML threatened to kill her. This was also the arc that made me feel for the previous lives of everyone around, I would have loved to see the two besties interacting before the raider came in and made a mess.

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The 3rd arc definitely made me sick because TW: s*xual assault and r*pe. It's sickening because it was the main focus of the whole entire arc, and I hated the raider in this one so bad. It was covered up as a missing memory and the raider with the help of her system made a fake video of the whole entire assault as if it was security footage. Which was crazy and disturbing because the raiders system can't detect the MC's system. The ML in this one was meh, besides him r*ping the MC when they were 19, he was just a kinda sad character.

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One of my personal favorites, the ML is a massive jerk but I love the world in this one. I found the 'I will kill anyone and do anything for you' type of attitude charming. TW: dubcon verging on r*pe. Maybe I'm just slow but the MC's go-with-the-flow attitude makes me look over a lot of things but she was trying to find medicine for her sick 10 year old (in no better ways to phrase this) partner. The ML is also more fleshed out than the others, he seems to play a more active role in the story, plus I just love Xingxing. I really truly hated how this one ended, I hated them in the base. I'm just a sucker for post apocalyptic worlds and ML's who are overpowered jerks but allow their lover to treat them however. I wished we saw how the ML was pre-apocalyptic world. I also loved the growth of the raiders friend, she was def one of my favorite characters, she had such character growth.

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The 5th arc was hard to read and didn't make much sense, it felt like it was only there to fill the story up. Spoiler

She was a dead (?) vampire who literally had a reverse haram. I still don't really know what the ML is even though I read it twice. This arc just seemed rushed and wasn't that interesting at all.

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I really enjoyed the 6th arc, it blend right into the previous arcs nicely. This one is more normal and simple with nothing major really happening. It was an enjoyable read, Sexy Older Sister x Gloomy Tsundere Younger Brother. I really did feel for the ML in this one. I loved their interactions and daily life.

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On the other hand the 7th arc was definitely... Hard to read. The MC seems to get dumber and less logical while the system becomes more of an afterthought.

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The 7th arc is her being a cat shapeshifter thing, to me it also didn't feel like she was the ML's white moonlight, even though that was the whole premise. The writing here is also so bad that it's kinda funny. To me this is what I expect from the beginning chapters of a web novel. Just the whole entire arc is kind of lackluster.

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These are definitely quick, not much thinking needed. It's a fun read as long as you don't question anything. The endings they have are also very quick. It's literally one sentence like 'and then they lived happily ever after doing whatever.' I would definitely read the novels of each of the arcs had its own story. Each concept had a strong plot that would be great if it was flushed out.

I was really sad that the 7th and 8th arc was written so badly 😭, I really enjoyed the novel but if anyone wants to read it, I recommend only going till the end of the 6th arc.
 
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