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While the novel holds some interest and promise, the translation is awful. I mean, I think that the original author could have been a little more descriptive rather than writing it as an bland essay in parts (eg from the perspective of one of the characters involved in the events) but I can't be sure of that since the translation is unable to convey the original story clearly enough due to grammatical errors, lack of the use of tenses, and inability to convey what is being said due to lack of sentence structure.