- #1
Honestly, I don't know how this got a decent ranking. The premise of the story is good. There's a goal, characters and magic. Yay.HOWEVER, this author has a lot of issues. Especially the portrayal of the characters. Every single time, he feels the need to comment of the beauty of the main character, the smell of her sweat and her breasts. I already get the general description, I don't need to imagine the author drooling over his keyboard as he writes.I can accept the previous issue since it's pretty standard. What I can't accept is the constant simping over him/herself of the main character. My god! He/she is also extremely undetermined despite how they tell themselves. Imagine setting a goal for yourself to become the strongest and then getting distracted by a store that sells nice stuff. They know that the world is a strong eat the weak world yet they constantly antagonise people.Being a trouble magnet is par for the course, you might say. Well yeah, but this MC is jumping headfirst into a lavapool. If it wasn't for the heavy plot armour, instant death.My last issue is the portrayal of the girls and the guys. The author clearly doesn't understand either very well and the assumptions and explanations for all the pervy stuff show it all. I may not understand much either, but I sure as hell know that a person who walked away from efficiently killing 4 people without any mental burden would scream like a child when seeing an Imp in a forest were, you expect to see imps.
- I apologize, this has become more of a rant than a review. I like the premise of the story and any man of culture would like echhi, but not when it's this forced. Thank you for your time.
