Demon Sword Maiden Chapter -- Discussion

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I mean, let get it out of the way. Its pretty much exactly how some other people described it. Hella cringey with the author and his sweat fetish, and sexualizing the MC every chapter he can. The plot is pretty average at best, you can tell the author really has no long term planning here and is just writing softcore p*rn here.

BUT, after you get past the first volume, it has some improvement. Less weird fetish stuff and a bit more combat and training. Its not still great by no means, but its alright enough to read a couple chapters a week in. If I could, I would probably rate this a 5/10. Would improve vastly if Lily stopped trying to focus on collecting women and doing SCP, but its already an improvement from volume one. Maybe one day it will improve further.
 
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