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The idea was interesting, but everything else was just... bad I guess. The pacing is just way too fast.In just a couple chapters MC goes from a weak mortal kid to a strong cultivator capable of killing big clans with ease. Add in a couple more chapters of MC getting to know people, showing off his power, getting into trouble, destroying a big family, and solving the conflict. Ok, we done here, time to move to a new place, to meet new people.World building- What, you got to know some of the sect names, what more do you want?People personalities- The crowd, the girls. the good people and the bad people. Thats enough, right?The Plot - MC has to be able to show off, to awe the crowd when they doubt him, or to make crowd laugh at the mature way hes acting, when hes clearly 6-7 year old. What other reason could there be to MC actions?So yeah.... Well, it is supposed to be parody, but I just couldnt keep reading. Maybe I just set my expectations too high, so it felt such a disappointment when I finally read it.
