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How to describe this novel? The idea is good but the written style is bad!I don't know if this is the first novel for this author or not, but one thing for sure, she can't even link her thoughts a lettel well!some examples:* When the FL cross over there and was still in a coma, her family were all angry for her, crying, want to go to find who could have harm her, etc... But the next moment she woke up, they still crying like they will die, she told them 'she didn't try to kill herself, she was pushed by someone, but now is more important to make money to fix te house.' and they immediately forget how they were crying and her near to death accident and all were 'Yes, we should make money to do this and that' and just end everything and get out of the room!!!! Seriously? At lest let them make sure she was okay, and for how they were sad, angry, shouldn't they first try to ask once and twice who the one who pushed her? But Nothing!*at ch3, when they were eating lunch, the FL said she will go up the mountian and her mother agreed immidiately, just said "take care of yourself", then the FL' brother said he'll go with her, all were happy, finish their lunch, the scene repeted as it was hapening for the first time, the FL told them she'll go up the mountain, the mother here was too worried about her and won't let her go, and the FL and others has to convince her that it's okay and that the FL is fine now to let her agree!All in all, as I said at first, the idea of this novel is not bad, maybe even more good, becuse we have a loving family and not the FL fighting with her bad family, But the style of written is not up to the idea at all. You can find holes in almost every sentence and scene.
