Overall I liked most characters, story is wholesome and heartwarming but I hate the MC and the Main FL Kuro. This is btw not a spoiler as the author already told us "this story will not be serious, no real fighting, everyone will fall in love with the MC" in the beginning. This is just a story of collecting 'lovers' saying "when they becomes lovers at some points this and that happens" is legally not a spoiler. thank you.
- MC is dense as it can be and he doesn't change "she confessed her love to, how did I not notice her feelings before this even though it was so obvious?!" next girl confesses "Eh?! She confessed me her love?! Now that I think about it it was really obvious she loved me...!" and it will probably continue...
- He gets more and more embarrassed at everything, it was bearable in the beginning but at some point he even started to nosebleed every few chapters...
- He 'desperately' wants to have 'pure' love, he apparently doesn't think it better than 'following his instincts' but always shows his oh so great 'iron will' holding back his urges when he is invited to do 'it' (because if both want to do it its not pure right?)
- Overall he becomes worse and worse as the story goes on, the first 100+ chaps are fine but....
I'm not complaining about him not having s*x, I just find his hypocrisy extremely disgusting. I don't need some perfect MC either, just a reasonable human being with somewhat consistent thoughts is more than enough.
My next complaint would be Kuro, the main female lead...
to me she feels like a badly copied version of Isis. But that not all, she is also always in a body of a 12 yo girl and the MC (21 yo) cant hold himself back from how sexy she is, this is more a complaint about the MC again my bad...
Anyways she doesn't just look like a child but she also behaves like a child, at first she was more of a motherly figure to the MC but as the chapters went on and the MC degraded more and more Kuro also degraded, finally becoming complete tr*sh when they become lovers.
So far I've liked every character except the 2 MCs which is really sad.
The story is ok, not much expectations in this type of novel but those few expectations are fulfilled so that's nice.
Author repeats everything a whole lot. example: "She went there" "Eh? She went there?" "Yes she went there!" inner dialog: so she went there hmmm she must have really went there "I see she, so she went there". Its not constantly at that level but sometimes, some level of repetition always stays though.
Author also loves to stutter in every dialog. In EVERY dialog. And everyone is blushing.
I would recommend reading this novel up to chapter 150 or so. At that point maybe keep reading while skipping all the inner dialog of the MC and just skimming the conversations involving Kuro.
