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I won't spoil sh*t for people, however I would say it's a great novel in terms of progression early on and falls off later on.My main issue with the character isn't that he's necessarily weak, as the author does a good job of making a scenario where he doesn't necessarily need physical strength to achieve the main plot, but he has a huge issue with being massively undermined as a character due to his lack of presence despite being the most important character in the story. In many scenarios it feels as if the MC could just not exist and the story would work without him. He also seems to be more of a bystander than an active role in the story, yes he does do things that in the plot are deemed impossible but he really only does it after a ton of exposition and it's really not him doing it. It takes hundreds of chapters for the MC to start actually getting character growth and it's by the end of the story or the coming close to the end of it. I get it's not serious but it becomes a bit silly when you make an MC so weak yet have him be so integral to the story. To those who make the argument that you don't need a strong MC, I disagree. There's a presence gained by having strength and this character really doesn't have any. He achieves nothing out of his own strength until much later on which is what frustrates me. Also Lilia as a character is just plain obnoxious, her behavior in regards to the MC is unwarranted and probably the worst of the heroines.