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(my opinions, my interpretations, subjective) Writing isn't smooth, it's "raw/crude" enough for u to notice it quite quick so I would recommend an editor or something to improve it, and the flow is kinda messy (especially at the beginning) . One thing that is a little annoying: the author keeps dropping spoilers, u reading then suddenly "years later X and Y", lol. The MC and everyone else have some level of individual traits, albeit being shallow and dumb most of the time.That being said, this story is not bad as something to pass time: Spoiler
it has some basics of second-chance and zombie novels (if you're in the mood), and the author throws some things for you to expect like the reunion with the cheater ex-girlfriend, the sly villain at the beginning that not one paid attention to, who made the apocalypse etc. (Yep, all cliche, but those things always get us and that's why they always use them lol)
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