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The story is no masterpiece. It is fairly lightearted and entertaining enough to pass time.The main issue is the prose. As Dragonulera mentioned, it is very hard to read. I am unsure if it is the original text that was badly written, the translation not being up to par, the lack of editing, the lack of proofreading, or simply if they used some translation software that had issues.Regardless, its full of flaws like grammar inconsistencies, duplication of texts across chapters, repetition of the same scenes, weird time skips, lack of distinction across character dialogue lines, lack of distinction between pov switches and scene changes, among many other things that pull down the story.By no means I’m saying the story is bad, the plot itself is quite enjoyable and would have been far more engaging than it currently is were it not for the long list of issues. As it stands, the story is pulled down by its horrendous execution that makes it seem more like a first draft that never got revisited rather than a simple yet enjoyable and entertaining story about the happenings of characters in an otome-like world.Read at your own discretion.
