Dark Fire Chapter 30 Discussion

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Halfway in, and I've lost count on how many times MC gets absentminded or lost in a thought or in a daze, it seems it is mentioned in almost every chapter. If not for plot armour, it would be quite baffling that he has managed to live upto his age with no surrounding awareness and without getting into accidents with his constant state of being dazed. I'm not bored with the novel, but it kinda feels like it's being written by a high schooler or someone who is experimenting with their writing skills.
 
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