When I Reincarnated as the Villain of a Game World, I Created a Harem and Broke the Protagonist’s Heart and Efforts! Chapter 42 Discussion

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Translation is good and all, but the story seems to go nowhere.

It's like this and that does happen in the story, but I have no idea what the big picture behind describing it is; I don't see any clear overarching plot.

Especially in the latest part of where I got, he's showing off how OP he is, but I have no idea why he decided to go as far as he did or why he had no repercussions for it.

So, the end feeling for me is basically bewilderment.

Finally, I think this novel is best read in bursts of tens of released chapters to avoid the feeling of the progression stalling... f. ex. I think at one point it took the MC about 4 chapters just to buy new clothes at a cloth shop... when 13 years of his childhood were skipped right after prologue in basically half of one chapter.

Still, in general the writing and translation are easy to read and despite the things above, the MC hasn't felt like an irritating neutron star of denseness, so I'm leaving my evaluation at 3 stars.
 
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