- #1
Despite the characters setting and the whole story seem set up well, the plotline is very 'Shallow'.The two Protagonists have each own kind of interesting personalities yet the character development did not grow smooth. They were so harash and hasty, even for a 80 something short story, it does not that understandable.The plot is pretty promising at first but when the relationship of two protagonists abruptly, forcefully and suddenly started, the plotline went downhill.Some Characters are like go-go and come-come. Some are like not needed but included for somewhat unnesessery informations.Come on. There are so many ways to develop on the romance lines for two MCs, but author chose a rogue and impatience one (that was the main reason this book is not getting the rating that deserve).