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The story is good on a technical level with (mostly) consistent pacing and three dimensional characters. On top of that the translation work is phenomenal.The real issues come with the writer's creative decisions. From the title and opening chapters it's sold as a revenge story. Main character is betrayed by his teammates, gets executed, and is reincarnated into the same world. It's pretty straight forward with lots of ways it can progress. But the main character seems to have little to no interest in getting revenge. What's more, just ten chapters in and there is now a reason that getting revenge would be catastrophic for the MC. So is this story supposed to be a revenge fic or not? Because everything about the set up is saying yes, but everything about the main character is saying no.