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A good story weighed down by the carelessly edited MTL. Wrong pronouns, mixed up speakers, some segments duplicated/missing while some misplaced, etc etc.As for the romance, it was pretty good. Both were mature and changed each other's lives for the better. The way they handled things made it so that potential issues never escalated or blew up out of proportion. ML, in particular, changed his old ways even before meeting MC because he was aware of his own issues. MC was also specially understanding and patient. It was quite the ideal relationship and, as always with these stories, looks contributed a lot to it, but readers can also see the work they put into it. Things didn't just happen magically.