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Quite nice at first, the writer did well with showing how sudden blindness affects a person, but there's so much dog blood and certain plot points way too "BL" for this kind of story.Spoiler
MC was married for years, but somehow he not only never loved his wife, who turned out to suddenly be a horrible person, he never slept or even kissed her.
The man is 30, they were married since their youth.
It was just to press him into the "inexperienced bottom who never loved or touched anyone" role.
[collapse]In addition, the co-dependency got so strong that it was just uncomfortable, there's no way to believe they genuinely love each other instead of being obsessive/possessive about/of someone who supported them and cared when no one else did.Especially ML, who the writer completely isolated until only MC was left.There are other, smaller details, like the medical aspect not making much sense, but that's a minor flaw compared to the rest.It's an ambitious, mature story the writer sadly wasn't able to pull off.Try it out if you like drama with a happy ending, but don't expect too much.