- #1
- The setting is bland and unoriginal - it's your typical JRPG mechanics with middle kingdom and demons.
- Main character's logic makes no sense: after vowing to exact revenge and getting a second chance by returning back in time, what does he do? He allows the very same pain and humiliation happen to him, because he needs a "justifyable reason" for revenge, as they haven't done much to him in the second timeline yet!.. Simply genius. Spoiler
I mean, I understand he had no way of doing his revenge right away and the only way to get stronger is to heal (and receive skills and levels in the process) people for the princess - but he could still do all of this WITHOUT going through unpleasant experience, simply by agreeing to work instead of acting afraid and refusing. He WILLINGFULLY put himself through all of this, only because he worried that his desire for revenge might die out.
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- Main character's logic makes no sense: after vowing to exact revenge and getting a second chance by returning back in time, what does he do? He allows the very same pain and humiliation happen to him, because he needs a "justifyable reason" for revenge, as they haven't done much to him in the second timeline yet!.. Simply genius. Spoiler
- The presumed "core" of this novel, the revenge part... is just lacking! Spoiler
The only thing he does to his revenge target is just breaking fingers few times, several bruises with external wounds, following with r*pe (with a help of red-hot metal). And to make matters worse, the latter part (rape) is almost completely skipped, barely any description! Even the first part of the revenge is barely described!
[collapse] What is the whole point of a revenge novel, if the revenge part is barely there?
- The presumed "core" of this novel, the revenge part... is just lacking! Spoiler
- And, apparently, it then goes straight into harem route... 'nough said.