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Let's see the story isn't bad, nor good, flesh out I'd say. MC gets a shitty life full of humiliation and torture so he uses OP magic to reset time and try again, but this time he plans on take revenge on the ppl that did him wrong, so far so not so original.You probably will like the novel till the end of first volume, I did, it's what comes after where I have a problem.See, I know that since it's a revenge novel, with dark topics such as torture and r*pe, you can't expect much from the MC, like you can't hope for him. to be that good of a person, and I might have agreed with you before if it wasn't for him being utter shit. The fact that this is a revenge novel doesn't necessarily means the MC must be shit, take for instance Jumpei from Dungeon seeker, he has seen and lived worse sh*t than him, forced to crawl in a place where 99% of the ppl die in the first floor, in a world where even good is shit, but even then he still remains his humanity and sense of value, now this guy doesn't.MC is just an hypocrite, he tries to find any excuse to take revenge on his target, cuz according to him he is a good person that won't do anything bad unless provoked, now you might think that's good except that he really believes he is a saint and a kind person, even though he is a psycho who brainwashed his companions into being nothing but s*x s*aves. He calls others rapist mu*deres, and sh*t like that even though he has no problem breaking someone over a f*cking cake, critics other for using drugs to r*pe even when he uses stronger ones to do the exact same shit.Yes, it's a revenge novel, but that dosent mean that the MC has to be this much of a sh*t character, a good revenge story need a character with whom you can relate and root for, someone you can care for when he is in dip. This guy is not.Another thing, this is a self insert type of novel, heavy on the p*rn side... or so you might think. Honestly while it does have a lot of s*x it's never describes it, just a few words of the MC saying how much of a stud he is, so the whole thing comes as unnecessary to the plot and is there just to ego stroke the author.Something that I can rescue of all this bullcrap is the way he inacts his revenge on the main villains, they are somewhat cleaver and imaginative, sadly it amounts to nothing when 3/4 of the story is him making excuses to take revenge.All in all this thing won't get past the 2 out of 5, it can be fun at times, and as I say the revenge descriptions are interesting, but the shitty MC and bland character just make this a pain to read.Man I feel refreshed after writing this, think I'm gonna do this more often lol.Pd: might be just my imagination, since I think this is a self insert of the author, but the author might be a misogynistic and homophobic, considering how he treats both women and gay ppl... dunno might be xd
