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At least 90% of the novel are system expositions and internal monologues of the MC about said system and it's skills/attributes, where he ponders about all the implications of each option, performs a bunch of number crunching and simulate the consequences.It gets a little less worse about chap 40+, but it's still bothersome and I got myself skipping a lot of the info dump, specially because they didn't matter in the end. The rest of the story is mostly grinding/farming ppl that invade his dungeon in a boring tell don't show manner.The MC lacks personality and is quite boring. We can't sympathise with him since he's either killing tons of 'innocent' ppl invading his dungeon, or treating his minions as expendable pawns even though they have intelligence but no free will.I'd rather be reading Dungeon Defense, Maou-sama no Machizukuri, or a bunch of other dungeon novels at royalroad that explore this theme far better and with an actual story.