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I feel like this novel tricked me. There’s just so much unnecessary information and details within the story that it tricked me into thinking it had good world building. But the more you read, the more you quickly realize a lot of it doesn’t actually matter.So the first 20 chapters is our MC playing around and testing out his new found dungeon, which sounds like a great ol’ time. But the biggest issue is, 1 – he has nobody to interact with (so it’s all internal monologue), 2 – he’ll eventually level up and a lot of the monsters/traps/equipment become completely irrelevant very quickly. So it’s just 20 chapters of ‘telling’ you a lot of useless information.Basically the story spends too much time with the MC weighing out his options and running through different scenarios in his head. I feel like I’m reading a strategy guide of a dungeon defence game rather than an actual story.
