Dungeon Battle Royale ~ Since I Became a Demon King, I Will Aim for World Domination ~ Chapter e148 (315) Discussion

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An interesting novel mixing dungeon master & road to kingdom concept. The novel has great world setting where the MC, as a Demon King have to battle against humanity & other demon kings to survive.

A. Character Development:

MC is a cunning, calculating person, & may act cold. He likes to form theories in his mind (talking on his own).

This may be the greatest selling point of this novel, how he trampled over his enemies with his craftiness.

The story focus too much on the MC thus disregarding the other characters importance. Everything from decision making & management is done by MC (he may order someone to do, but ended up controlling them by himself). Even during war, he’ll just ended up ordering/controlling every single minor step of his subordinates. No flexibility for them to make change on the course of story.... And don’t hope for romance, only have pure belief (which reader may think as Teetee, but will not go beyond that). Tbh I dont think we have Heroine (s) yet.

B. World Building:

The setting of story is great, many details that can be expanded, like crafting new equipments & stuffs. The pace of war also great. But probably because author put too much focus on MC so the world going around him going so slow resulting in time-skip which we will have few times later in the story.

There are still many things left uncovered & promising,

Spoiler

New Rule of Party Restriction being lifted, Laplace’s true goal & mastermind, encounter with 12 of 13 Demon Kings, Chaos & Law outside Japan, etc.

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so this still has potential to become great novel. So just hope author still in a great spirit to continue this series as I can already see the series already reach 300+ch (longest chapter author ever wrote) but with few time-skips in latest chapter.
 
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