- #1
Its got the normal harem problems... it's not a bad go. Kind of a fun romp, the tone shifts almost on a dime at near where I stopped.We'll see if it manages the transition tone of the story, but the arc ends in a sort of abrupt tone shift from our protag, that doesn't feel all that earned in my mind. Its around chapter 100 you'll know it when you see it.I think that transition really needs to be pretty pitch perfect to really keep us moving along, but I'm not sure its in harmony with the rest of the recipe.We'll see from here on out, I'm not sure if breaking from formula will help or hurt...I wish it didn't take so long to commit to a change, and then for it to sort of feel this abrupt and while the event is decently telegraphed... the tone shift for the internal emotional state of our protag isn't.We'll see if this settles from here eh! Kind of fun seeing them go for it.