- #1
The quality of the novel is great. The stories are funny and the characters are well-fleshed out. However, the story often is in the perspective of the people inside the Main Character's illusion. Rather than exploring the story of the main character, it's often different stories that he's creating instead. I want to read more about the main character rather than everyone else's love lives and relationships inside these illusion worlds, and so this story isn't for me.