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The novel started off quite well...But there were some plot holes, but they were not the reason for me give one star the main reason was that the protagonist was too shameless.Like seriously he like in 3rd chapter proposed to a girl and few chapters later he is with his adjutant. And what he gives himself as an excuse is that he isa traverser and he is different from others so has the right to play with other people's feelings!!!!!!! So f****** shameless!!!! How can he be a good protagonist.... I can accept a harem but I can't accept what he did.What is even more shameless is that the adjutant is actually the childhood sweetheart of the original body but he shamelessly accepts he into the Harem. Obviously he has no memories of the original body and no emotional basis to like her, but is still shamelessly pretends to have feelings and accepts her into the Harem... and he also doesn't tell her about his relationship with the first girl.I don't know how does system judged him to be a competent commander as he is so h**ny that the enemy just need to send a beautiful woman and they could Steal all all the military secrets without any effort.So seriously just forget this novel if you are expecting a good character male protagonist and normal IQ...Also elaborate on what the plot hole exactly is...it's like the enemy is just beyond Jupiter Asteroid belt or something but the entirety of human Federation doesn't know, I can accept that they can keep the population blinded for a certain amount of time but after a while it's impossible... Like aren't there any discharged soldiers that will also go back to civilian duties or something, won't they know about it, and then their family and friends... military activities like this are very hard to keep secret so this is a very big plot hole that does not confirm with what the real situation should be.. keeping secret of such a big movement is ok for a few months or even a year but beyond that is impossible... so I will say this plot hole is very brainless..Another one is that there was no gravity device so that's so s*upid, like are all the things inside the buildings floating or something, thats so dumb to say that gravitation device didn't exist in the era of interstellar exploration...This is obviously done to give protagonist a hallow... Too Braindead😐😐😑😑😑🙄🙄
